Thursday, November 19, 2015

In Class Lab-- Incorporating Sources Effectively

Gun Control:
ProCon.org-
Regarding the issues of gun control ProCon.org, a credible website states “The United States has 88.8 guns per 100 people, or about 270,000,000 guns, which is the highest total and per capita number in the world. 22% of Americans own one or more guns (35% of men and 12% of women).

U.SNews.com-
On an online news report from U.S News informs us that the issue of gun control has been brought to the highest courts before, in 2008 Supreme Court ruled that it is a constitutional right to own a gun for personal use, therefore the issue of gun control at that time was not changed. The article however went on to explain that the Supreme Court only applied to federal law, not local and state.

Politics of Gun Control-
According to Robert J. Spitzer, in his book Politics of Gun Control he says there are two related questions of government authority that the gun control controversy revolves around, which are: “does the government have the right to oppose regulations; and, assuming the existence of such a right, should the government regulate guns?” (2). He then goes on to answer these questions and states “The fundamental purpose of government—indeed, its first purpose—is to establish and maintain order” (3).
Sources I Used:
  • Book
  • Online Magazines


Works Cited
“Should More Gun Control Laws Be Enacted?” ProCon. 11 Nov. 2015. Web. 19 Nov. 2015
Spitzer, Robert. Politics of Gun Control. Washington DC: CQ Press, 2004. Print

Warren, James. “Gun Control and Gun Rights.” USNews. 15 Nov. 2015. Web. 19 Nov. 2015.

Collaborative: Spriggs Article vs. Our Articles

1.       We all agreed that Spriggs made a convincing argument, and proved her point in evidentiary support.  Specifically, she showed how local farming strengthens local economies, and reduces financial and environmental costs of shipping foods (produce, dairy, etc…) around the world.
2.       She addressed the counter-argument by giving it credibility, but said it is important to buy food that grows naturally in the environment around you, as much as you can.  She also stated that small farms are more efficient, despite the common misconception that larger farms produce more food.
3.       We said that using pathos, Spriggs can effectively persuade the reader that there is a need for people to buy locally.  By pointing out that almost all glaciers will be gone in National Parks by 2050, and talking about the treatment of animals she is able to establish her argument’s credibility.  It gives the reader a sense of responsibility in the issue.

4.       The picture of the semi – trucks, give you a visual of the environmental issues she is talking about.  They allow the reader to see just how big they are, and likely how much gas they use.  They also break up the text and give a visual aid.

Wednesday, November 18, 2015

In Class Lab--Developing Your Argument

Gun Control:
1) There should be stricter gun control laws.
2) My audience is my fellow classmates as well as my teacher and those who take interest to this subject.
3) I will appeal to their beliefs by showing how many lives are taken due to the lose restrictions on guns in the United States.
4) My audience should believe me because I am a well informed citizen living in the united states who is put through the pain of seeing all these lives taken due to the easy access of guns. As well as the quotes, stats, and opinions I will use, and site, from credible sources throughout my essay.
5) The first reason the change should be made is because of the high rate of lives that are taken every year in the united states due to the ease of access we have to guns these days.
    The second reason why the change should be made is because other countries have proven that stricter gun control laws will make a difference.
6) A good point the other side makes about this topic is that they have the right to bare arms according to the constitution.
7) My rebuttal to this would be we are not fighting to take away guns all together just enforce and make gun control laws stricter so guns cannot fall into the wrong hands so easily.
8)  Most opposed to this only state the one point.
9) --
10) Everyone living in the US or even those in other countries who watch the US news will benefit to this because they will not have to see the tragedy of so many lives be taken by those who mistreat guns.

On Buying Local -pg 100 #1-4

1) Yes, Katherine Spriggs has convinced me that this topic is one that does indeed matter and is now that should be taken seriously. She has convinced me of this by stating all the environmental issues that take place from buying industrial produce and by providing evidence that solutions to these major problems is buying locally.
2) Spriggs dose state major counterarguments she writes, "Some argue that buying local can actually have negative environmental effects" after this she goes on stating what these so called "negative environmental effects" are. Basically it comes down to people saying its a waste of time as well as effort to try to grow things, her example being a pineapple, in places where it will not naturally thrive.  She leads us back to her argument by saying thats not what she's encouraging, she's not stating that we should try to grow pineapple in Washington, she's trying to encourage buying as much local products as possible meaning produce which is locally grown near you.
3) Paragraph 3 starts by saying "In 2010, the international community is facing many environmental challenges, including global warming, pollution, and dwindling fossil fuel resources." she goes on by stating how all these issues really effect everyone and what causes them. As well as mentioning these important issues and how industrial produce is a cause of them and many more, she also takes her argument, that we should buy locally, and offers it as a solution to these problems. Backing up her statements with factual evidence and opinions from experts solidifies her point, and therefor makes it and clearly identifies why this is a topic that matters.
4) The pictures Sprigg's includes in her essay give the audience a visual which she then uses to help back up her argument. allowing the audience to see the semis, in fig. 4, traveling cross country to deliver produce solidifies her point that this is waste of natural resources being used to transport these items.

Thursday, November 12, 2015

Goats to Hip Hop Artists

1A) Hip Hop artists should put goat sounds in their music because it will be funny.
1B) Hip Hop Artists
1C) They should care because they want their music to be popular. They believe that they are putting out music that people will enjoy and they will gain fans and money.

2A)  because Taylor swifts parody video featuring goat sounds quickly became an internet sensation.
2B) Because Comedy is a good way to draw in an audience.
2C) Goat sounds make good dubstep for background music.

3A) Because it is a new trend, not everyone may understand it.
3B) Some people may not like goats.
3C) Some people may think that the goat sounds are too loud and distracting from the music.

4A) Just because its new doesn't mean its not good, also even if people don't necessarily like something they might follow it just because its a trend.
4B) A lot of people could like goats, also if it is trending people may warm up to the idea of the goats.
4C) The goat noises will be used in situations where it makes the music better, not just randomly.

5) First of all, the Taylor Swift goat video got over 20 million views on YouTube proving that this is a popular trend that people think is entertaining. Since this video isn't completely new people will be more willing to accept seeing it in more music. Even people who don't like goats might find it funny because they don't have to look at the goat they just hear a funny sound.

1A) Chickens to farmers. We want farmers to keep healthy chickens on their farms
1B) Farmers
1C) They should care because chickens provide eggs and meat for people to eat. If the chickens are raised well and they know where they are coming from, people will be more likely to want to eat them.
1D) They can gain good healthy eggs and chickens free of caged life and disease.

2A) Because healthy chickens are better for consumers health than caged chickens full of water and chemicals
2B)Because chickens are good livestock that provide lots of food

2C) Chickens are a basic farmers food staple

Drinking and Driving-Partner Analysis

We both analyzed the drinking and driving video and found that Pathos was the most commonly used persuasive technique. The video started off using pathos when a news report stated that two girls died in a car accident, pathos was also used when images of the car accident appeared on the screen and the girls parents described how it felt when they received the heart wrenching call. When the girls best friend described how it felt during the crash her emotions made the audience epithetical to her and her family. Another technique used was ethos because a credible source (fire chief) described they scene of the crash.

Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Drinking and Driving - Video Analysis

This video focused on the serious consequence that drinking and driving can cause. The video follows the story of two sisters, Meghan and Shauna Murphy, who were killed due to drinking and driving. You hear from many people about the horrors that night faced for them an others, and throughout their stories the appeal it takes to the audiences emotions is very real. Listening to the parents talk about the moments when they realized both their daughters were gone is heart wrenching and a feeling no one would wish upon anyone. Images of the upside down car tangled in the electrical lines flashed across the screen, and were very shocking. Trying to imagine how it must have felt to be hanging up there in the car for the girl who survived, how the EMT's felt when arriving at the scene, and how the parents must of felt when they saw their car above the ground in which their daughter died in. From the intro of the news report of the girl's death, to the moments at the end were the daughters parents discussed how they never want their daughters to be forgot, this video was full of pathos.

Tuesday, November 10, 2015

How Things Mean

Album covers:
1.       What do they suggest?
The first album cover of the girl suggest that her songs might be provocative and sexual. The other two with the guys suggest that their music will be mostly rap and inappropriate for kids due to explicate lyrics.
2.       How do they suggest it?
The body language of the girl is provocative, and her facial expression is luring you in. The guy’s posture is very intimidating which makes them look tough.
3.       Which elements of each image work on the viewer in various ways?
For the girl viewers are drawn in by her sex appeal. While the men look as if they’re about to drop the most fire mixtape of 2015.
Symbols of Patriotism:
1.       What do they suggest?
They suggest patriotic images of the USA, Great Britain, and France.
2.       How do they suggest it?
The eagle is associated with feelings of freedom and pride, the American flag makes you associate freedom with America. The bull dog is the national dog of Great Britain, he is standing on their flag looking very noble. The words in the third image mean liberty, equality, and fraternity and is the national motto of France, these words are etched into the wall showing that they are concrete ideals of the country.

3.       Which elements of each image work on the viewer in various ways?
The positioning of the dog and eagle convey strength because of their stance on the page, and the words as well convey strength because they are carved in stone.
                                           
Thesis Statement: The images use important and celebrated symbols of their countries to convey patriotism, strength, and ideals.
·         The eagle is associated with feelings of freedom and pride, the American flag makes you associate freedom with America.
·         The bull dog is the national dog of Great Britain, he is standing on their flag looking very noble.
·         The words in the third image mean liberty, equality, and fraternity and is the national motto of France, these words are etched into the wall showing that they are concrete ideals of the country.
·         The positioning of the dog and eagle convey strength because of their stance on the page, and the words as well convey strength because they are carved in stone. 

Reading Sources Critically



1. What arguments does the author make?
    The author makes all arguments toward the position of not verbally using the N-word. Multiple arguments are brought up from playground examples such as “I can talk about my mother, but you sure as hell better not talk about my mother!” Another example that Tim Wise used was about a particular comedian Jeff Foxworthy and his jokes regarding “rednecks.” He argues that because Jeff may somewhat fall into the category of group that he is making fun of, it is seen as acceptable. On the flipside, if Jerry Seinfeld was to use these same jokes in a standup routine, it would be inappropriate. His main position is that white people should not use verbally the N-word, however it is at the discretion of black people to use freely.
2. How persuasive do you find the argument?
The argument is very persuasive. Tim Wise supports his stance on the topic with plenty of evidence. Wise is clear on why this issue is important, while giving his view of how it should be handled. He explains more than just the white man's point of view, and explains the point of view of a black man. The medium allows him to express his authority with a strong tone.
3. What is the author's stance?
    The stance the author takes is that he believes it isn't his place to determine how and when it is acceptable to use the word due to him being a white person. Although he does take a firm stance that it’s not his place to determine the above points, he does voice very clearly that if you’re not black you shouldn't use the word.
4. Does the publisher bring a certain stance to the work?
    His speech was part of Boston College’s FACES organization, which is designed to promote awareness about discrimination and racism. Boston College is interested in race relations and wants their community to be a part of discussions like this.
5. Do you recognize ideas you’ve run across in other sources?
    To my limited knowledge on the subject, Tim Wise brought up some new original and very persuasive ideas to the table to help illustrate his point. Some of the more generic things he said about Mark Twain and his use of the N-word in his book Huckleberry FinnI had heard before.
6. Does this source support or challenge your own position - or does it do both?
    I am in agreement with Tim Wise and his statements of when it is appropriate to use the word. As a white person, hearing other white people say the N-word sounds very inappropriate and out of place (being that this is not the 1950’s anymore). His examples only furthered my own belief/stance on the subject, and I think this was a very informative and explanatory video.
7. What can you tell about the intended audience and purpose?

    The purpose of the piece is to educate and offer some solution on who/ how the “n-word” should be used. The intended audience is students and faculty members who attend Boston College. He also aims to further educate people like who are fans of his writing, take a particular stance on the subject, or raise awareness of his opinion on how the topic should be dealt with. Also, since Tim Wise’s video is on youtube, it can be intended for the general public and anyone who is interested in being involved in the topic.

Monday, November 9, 2015

Think About Your Writing-- pg. 70

Recently I wrote an essay on three ad campaigns that were related and worked together to get a point across. I choose three ads from Smokefree which worked together to awaken people about the harsh consequences of smoking cigarettes. I analyzed these ads making the images they used a prominent part of the discussion, I concluded that allowing the audience to have a visual aid and then allowing them to form their own conclusion on it was a more effective process instead of just being another voice telling them what they shouldn't do, and yelling facts at them which they cannot see to be true. My motivation for writing this essay and choosing the topic of anti-smoking comes from knowing that this is a topic that is not taken seriously but is one that sound be.

Yes We Can

The change of medium to a video allowed for many contributing factors to help empower this speech even more than it was. The fact that you see a very powerful man, the president of the United States giving the speech through most of the video alone gives it an immense amount of power, and the fact that you see him, a face whom everyone knows, standing up and giving this speech along with others whom we've never seen before adds to the argument that yes we can, us together can. the additional music added and voice-overs help to keep the audience interested in order to hear the main points of the speech. And the written words are a way to visually point of key parts and important features of the speech that viewers should not miss.

Thursday, November 5, 2015

Look to see where and how positions are expressed around you-pg. 66

  
It appeals to me and others because it is funny and using comedy is a good way to get your point across when it could be offensive to others. Using Dr. Phil in this meme adds to the comedy appeal because Dr. Phil is usually very serious and doesn't regularly use comedy, he is also very straight forward with people and doesn't hold back when telling them what is wrong with their lives. "Your're fat" is the biggest words on the page catching the readers attention first, this statement is also in all caps and is white with black edging making it really stand out. To revise this meme for a different audience it could be put into video form, it would be different because the visuals would be moving which would catch the viewers attention differently.

Bibliography:
"Funny memes life-of-a-student". Meme. Why are you stupid? 22 June 2015.
"Memes Vault Funny Memes Randomly Picked". Meme. Imgzz.info. 1 November 2015.
 "You're Fat" Meme. Pinterest. 28 May 2014.

Think about the genre pg. 62

This week I've taken a position on:

  • why my sister should watch a certain documentary 
  • on different ad campaigns for my English essay 
  • where me and my family should go for spring break 
  • what we need to get for our trip to Colorado 
  • what I should get my sister for her birthday
  • what classes I should take next quarter 
  • where I should go get breakfast, lunch, dinner
This week the people around me have taken a stance on:
  • where we should go on vacation for spring break
  • what type of makeup is the best to use for Halloween 
  • why someones costume was the best of the night
  • how my sister feels about her job 
  • who to vote for in the election